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The Fat Girls' Eatery

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Membership in the Bakery on Food Court Street flourished over the time two overly-hefty women spent together, with their new co-workers. If one walked into the bakery, they were most likely never coming out, unless they had some steel willpower.

In the bakery, the woman at the new reception table was Gabbie. She had a friendly face, and demeanor, even for someone of her size. She was someone who needed a bench to sit properly on a chair, as she had become at least 700 lbs., if not, higher. Her huge belly was the first thing to grab attention, as her special apron perfectly accentuated her girth. Her legs looked a lot like soft, shapely logs, while her arms had a decreased range. In fact, it almost seemed as if she could only sit.

Gabbie smiled as a flying Robo-pal brought her a large glass of Strawberry Milk.

"Thank you!" She said as she began to drink. As soon she took a break, she found a slightly larger woman waddling to the service bar.

"Hi, Nikki!" Gaby said as she waved to her longtime friend. Nikki let out a husky sounding sigh, as she had to turn around completely, just to face Gabbie and say "Hello."

Nikki was the blue-haired woman who would have chosen this bakery as the LAST place to go to. Nikki's body was different, compared to Gabbie's. Nikki's chest was only half of what Gabbie's was, in terms of size. However, Gabbie retained a smaller, but wider waist. Her huge thighs had become much harder to work with, and wearing lighter clothes didn't help either (not that they did). Nikki was 821 lbs. last time she checked.


It was about 10:00 AM, the opening time for the Bakery (or at least the new time). At this time, Gabbie was just scribbling in a notepad, while occasionally sipping her drink. Nikki, on the other hand, would spend  four hours eating a large breakfast.

In only a half-hour, Tia, a former waitress, came to her boss, Nikki.

"Nikki, what do we do now? We've finished training."

"Yeah," another girl added, "And we pretty much know all there is to dessert."

Nikki looked up and didn't see any customers. "Hm," she said to herself, "No customers today??"

Finally, a customer showed up. It was a man with his girlfriend. Both were tourists, hoping to find the ideal place to spend time together. From the looks of things, they weren't close to happy about crash-landing in this area.

"See, Chelsea?" the man said, "I told you we should've just gone to the mall."

"So you could take me to a restaurant, buy "something" and leave? You need to treat a woman right!"

Gabbie nodded to the girl beside Tia, and as if on cue, that girl walked in front of them, wearing a white apron and a pretty pink blouse and skirt underneath. What made them both pay attention was the girth of all the four women in the restaurant. Tia was simply large-bottomed, and her body was large enough for a king-size bed to be treated like a twin. Nikki and Gabbie were simply too fat, and the girl beside Tia, wearing a name tag that read, "Robbie" was a bit top-heavy, but globular, overall.

"What the heck?" Chelsea's boyfriend said softly. "Where are we??"

"I don't know," Chelsea whispered to him, while looking at her svelte form, "Maybe one of those strange places..."

"Are you still hungry, by the way? Because, I know I was, since we left this morning."

"I am," Chelsea responded, "But there HAS to be somewhere better to--"

Just then Robbie and Tia presented a few samples to the couple.

"Would you like a few samples? Something for your buddies?" Ronnie said, while lending a large smile.

Chelsea remembered her diet, but her stomach was pretty much crying now. She sighed, and said politely, "I'll have one of those."

 

Tia gave her a piece of the cake that was made popular.

 

Chelsea and her boyfriend both expressed shocked looks. Just one piece of this cake was normally considered a simple slice of cake.

"That's our specialty: Deluxe Cream Cake!" Tia said cheerfully.

Robbie was next to Chelsea and said quietly, "It's such an awesome feeling when bits and chunks just melt in your mouth..."

"Um," Chelsea said to Robbie, "How did you just get next to me?"

The room remained silent. Chelsea shrugged and took a bite. "I don't think I've eaten anything like this," she said, noting how unfamiliar this flavor was. "In fact, I just may have another sample."

Chelsea's boyfriend stared in awe. He grabbed her hand, gently, and led her away for a bit. Then , he dragged her to a place across the street. He then looked at her in the eyes and said, "You worked hard to keep your figure! You can't just go around ruining it like that!"

"I know, I know," she said, "But that flavor I just tasted. It's otherworldly. I mean, I can't describe it! I just need to understand it."

"What you need to understand is that overeating leads to weight gain!"

"Come on, not every person that's fat is badly unhealthy!"

"So? That doesn't mean anything. You just need to keep yourself decent-looking, so that--"

"Johnny, I don't want to talk about that again. You said that was how you lost your last girlfriend right? Now listen--I'm HUNGRY, either let me eat when I need to, or find a girl who's willing to meet your cookie-cutter demands!"

With that, Chelsea stormed back into the Bakery. Her boyfriend saw the sign on it. It read "Fat Girl's Eatery and Bakery."

"Huh." Johnny said to himself. He then elected to wander around the plaza, hoping to meet another girl who wasn't so quick to surrender to hunger.

 

 

 

 

Gabbie was in the middle of her lunch, when she felt something undone. Gabbie sighed, and knew what to do.

 

"Robo!"

Suddenly a small Robo-pal came to her.

"I think my apron came off. Could you fix it, please?" Gabbie asked in her most polite tone. The robot assistant complied and flew behind her to fix up her apron. In the while, Gabbie was still sitting down, but the reason her apron (A custom-made one) was getting snug was because she jumped up to 798 lbs. Her lunch did wonders for her body, in that regard.

Her best friend, and co-owner of the restaurant, Nikki was in her office, sampling some of Tia's cooking. Needless to say, Tia's cooking was a hooker. After eating 10 platters of Tia's food, Nikki nodded in acceptance. "Tia, I don't know what to say about your cooking! I don't think it could be better. Therefore, I want you to take this book and learn these new recipes."

Tia seemed intimidated by that book of recipes, but nonetheless, she honored her Nikki's wishes and returned to the kitchen.

 

Ronnie saw her and looked like she was saved by an angel.

"Well, what took you?"

"Nikki wanted to see me is all."

"Our new friend here is pretty hungry,"

"So?"

"She only wants that Deluxe Cake!"

"Oh." Tia looked at Chelsea, and that was all she needed to know. Chelsea was basically destroying each piece of cake that came her way. Robbie and Tia agreed that their bosses shouldn't be letting people enjoy free samples, but their bosses pretty much insisted on this. Ergo, Chelsea's appetite was awakened.

"HEY!" Chelsea barked out, "You two have anymore of this stuff? I want more of these!" Chelsea's attitude changed along with her body. Where she was once athletic, she was now pudgy. Her breasts simply disagreed with her undergarment, as even through a non-revealing top, they were extremely noticeable. Her belly looked a lot bigger--as if she gained a load of weight in mere minutes. It was simply mystifying in so many ways. It hung down in subtle, yet inviting manner. Her thighs had greatly expanded to the point where a teenage person could fit one of her thick legs. Her rear end simply begged for more seats. Chelsea's face was covered in rich frosting, explaining her perfectly round face.

The two girls looked at each other nervously, and headed to the kitchen.

 

Once inside the kitchen, Tia sighed, and looked at Robbie. "I'm suddenly regretting that we walked in here."

"I heard that."

"We've been training on the job, and this is our first customer! I'm not even sure I've ever seen anyone want to eat a lot of one thing!"

Robbie sighed in agreement. "When do you think she'll stop eating?"

"I'm not even sure." Tia replied.

 

It took them five seconds to see that their newest customer was growing impatient.

"I want some more of that cake!"

Tia stared at the book that she got from Nikki. Now, she figured, was a good time to see if that cake was in the book. "What was the name of that cake?" Tia said as she flipped to the index.

"Deluxe something...what was it?"

"I think it was Citrus something."

"Are you sure? It's not in the--"

Chelsea interrupted them. She was huffing and puffing from having to carry nearly 3 times her former weight. "Deluxe Cream Cake." She said, to help them find the recipe. "Look. I asked for some more food, but I couldn't wait. I just want to know how to make it--or if I could somehow be here with you two."

 

 

 

Meanwhile, Gabbie and Nikki were now in the same room together. They were remembering that lady who had basically fed them into corpulence.

"Look at this," Nikki said, taking out a photograph. It had Nikki and Gabbi when they were skinnier. They must have looked like sticks compared to the Nikki and Gabbie at this time. Gabbie just laughed and ordered he Robo-pal to bring up 10 platters of desserts.

"I wonder how our new girls are doing. Soon enough, I intend for them to take over this bakery."

"You sound like you're about to retire. But it's not even time yet."

"Well, Gabbie," Nikki said barely touching the top of her belly, "I have way too much of me to even consider running this place for that long."

Gabbie frowned, and at that moment, her Robo-pal arrived with a load of dessert. Gabbie's melancholy vanished, and she quickly dug in. Nikki's stomach reacted, forcing her to get just as hungry as Gabbie. Something was off, but Nikki was probably too hungry to care.

"Um, Robo-pal?" Nikki said, nudging it gently, "Can we get 40 platters please? I have a feeling that I'm going to be hungry for a long time."

Gabbie seemed to smile a bit.

 

 

Tia, Robbie, and Chelsea had also unofficially gathered themselves together in the kitchen to churn out as many Deluxe Cream Cakes as possible. Something strange occurred as they were about to taste the fruits of their labor. Each girl took a bit of the cake, and found themselves unable to contain their appetites since.

Six hours of feasting solely on that cake proved why the Deluxe Cream Cake was an anchor to the restaurant--as well as the anchor of those who ate it. Nikki ended up in the four-digit realm, as she was now 1022 lbs., the other girls were in the mid 700s, and Gabbie was slightly lighter than Nikki. In short each one of these women never left the bakery ever again.

 

 

"I'll bet you guys are hungry." Gabbie said one week later. "I know I am!"

"I'm very hungry, but why is it that we all get hungry when YOU get hungry?" Nikki asked Gabbie.

"Secret!"

At that moment, Nikki knew that her best friend knew something. What that was remained a mystery as no one ever came close to finding out. Johnny had found another woman to be with in the time that passed since he left Chelsea. Now, he was touring through town with Angelique, and she saw a very cozy looking bakery, with the sign, "Fat Girl's Eatery."

"Hey," Angelique said, "We should check that place out!"

Johnny recognized that place--and despite not actually experiencing it, said, "I know what that place is like. DON'T go in there. You may never come out."

Angelique ignored him and went closer to the restaurant, where she was greeted by Gabbie, who seemed to reside in the front of the bakery. As soon as they introduced themselves to each other, Angelique felt very hungry.

"I can hear your tummy." Gabbie said playfully. "Would you care for a free Deluxe Cream Cake?"

"Well, when you're hungry, who would say no?"

 

Angelique would soon be done with her old way of life.

Basically a sequel to revivedracer209.deviantart.com… which is by far, my most popular WG story so far. I was prompted to write a sequel by a deviant--won't say who, and also I realized that writing this would mark EXACTLY ONE YEAR since I made this story.

 *FINISHED*

*Haters of this type of literature can hit the X button to be whisked back to their ideal worlds.*

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Deadpool441's avatar

Well, this is certainly an interesting story; the otherworldly taste seems too good to be true, but who cares about that part? The point is, this story was very enjoyable to read. In fact, I might be able to review that other sequel story if you wanted me to. because that looks just as promising as this one. The main parts of this story I enjoyed was the weight gain element (obviously), the otherworldly taste of the Deluxe Cream cake, and the way this story was written. It seems that boyfriend has some competition, and for once, it's not another woman.  


However, this story did have one minor mistake that I found: and that is when you said 'Robbie', and then changed it to 'Robbie'. I don't know if that was you changing your mind about the name, or if your fingers missed certain keys on the keyboard, but that's just it. Seriously, that's the only mistake I found. 


Overall, I give you 4/5 stars for the reason stated above. I also applaud you for writing stories like this. Maybe you should keep writing, and doing that art you do. It's interesting, and enough to keep me entertained, along with the many other people that watch your page. Well done


Vision: 4/5


Originality: 4/5


Technique: 4/5


Impact: 4/5